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A Special Day一个特殊的日子

作者: demoncm | 时间: 2018-12-27 | 投稿

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Today was my father's birthday, which was such a big day for me, so I wanted to give him a surprise. My father always gave me what I wanted, because he was busy and tried to do something for me. Actually, he was a great father for me. I told my mother that I wanted to make a dish for my father and she was very happy to teach me. So when I went home after school, I rushed to the kitchen and prepared for the food. With my mother's help, I was very confident. When my father went home, he was very happy and praised me a lot. He said this was the biggest present.
  今天是我父亲的生日,这对我来说是个大日子,我想给他一个惊喜。我的父亲总是把我想要的东西都给我。他很忙,所以总想为我做些事情。实际上,对我来说他就是一个伟大的父亲。我告诉妈妈,我想为我的父亲做一桌菜,她很高兴的说要教我。所以当我放学后回到家后,我就冲到厨房,准备食物。在我妈妈的帮助下,我很有信心能做出一桌好菜。当父亲回到家时,他非常高兴,表扬了我。他说,这是最棒的礼物。

点评:

作者描述的是爸爸过生日自己给爸爸做饭当礼物的过程,但内容过于简短,不够具体。