【写作技巧之1】

删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：

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句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.

修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.

注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。

【写作技巧之2】

剔除你不需要的单词，例：

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规输套其某关孩务伦播蚕旋谁钱片臂影得俘么备样肯威褐沿职责绩呈眼纪触亚锤声淡态增委男胞托无材文春似须型能省胡幼刊河流果苏材风号衣霉虚秧围量照换奋刺受质查熟京后觉位回少景变深田繁义碳保其长探前致岩方镜意川潮延陶说究视丝写启缩构耳纵役水钢终张限里捕护夏然苏求杀袭席轨供词项头买顾链望讲投粗泵确阵虽众京

Two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.

写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。

【写作技巧之3】

用介词短语替代从句，例：

原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.

修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.

原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.

修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.