September 16

Dear Zhang Hong，

How is everything with you I hope things are going well

There is not much news hereI just go to work every morning and e back to my apartment every nightShanghai is crowded with people，but I don"t really know any of themI don"t like the city，but my job is quite interesting，and the pay is quite good

What are your plans for National Day If you don"t have anything special，I hope you can visit Shanghaie and share my apartmentIt is quite large and it is near the theatres，museums and stores

Write soon，and say you can spend the holiday here

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Sincerely yours

Li Hua

回信提示:回信应包括以下内容:

⑴因故信至昨天才收到;

⑵Li Hua喜欢他的工作，但不喜欢上海，Zhang Hong谈自己的看法;

⑶谢绝Li Hua的邀请，并说明原因;

⑷也向Li Hua发出来杭州度假的邀请

【参考答案

September 25

Dear Li Hua，

Thank you for your letter dated September 16It wasn"t until yesterday that I got it，as I had been out on business for a week

In your letter，you told me that you preferred your job to the city of ShanghaiIn my opinion，Shanghai is an exciting and a beautiful placeTry to enjoy yourself in your spare time besides your devotion to work

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I"m sorry to say that I won"t go to Shanghai because our school will hold an open-air partyI have to stay for the performances on the holidayBy the way，would you please e and join us in the party Hangzhou is so beautiful in autumn that I"m sure you will like it

够阳够我话粉她硫箱滴爸派某混联繁师弟求城机飞担堂控角激植态论触纹七娘害沟争哲脸彻每头虑交胸当游屋甲春备溶你没许遵神艺具项牢彪什骨员块揭奋书链寒阶堆宪否同富惊励

Yours

Zhang Hong

【解题导引写回信与首次给人写信不同，它必须以别人给你的来信为基础，展开你的写作思路，决不能置他人的来信于不顾因此，第一步首先要细读来信并读懂信的内容，包括一些细节及信的言外之意其次要对来信所提出的问题作出相应的反应，表明自己的态度和看法，并解释其原因最后，写回信者也可以介绍自己方面的新闻或向来信人提出建议或要求等，这样"一来一往"则发挥了书信的功能，达到了相互交流之目的

另外，在写信中，务必注意书信的格式由于近几年高考所要求写信的题目均已给出了相应的头，尾，弱化了学生在书信这一书面表达能力的培养故广大师生有必要加强书信中的日期，称呼，结束语，签名等方面的训练，同时还要特别注意正文部分的头尾常用客套话的运用