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怎样写出英语作文得分的“亮点”

作者: 耽误你个哦i | 时间: 2019-08-13 | 投稿

3。 通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。例如:

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(原文) He stopped us an hour ago。 He made us catch the next offender。

(修正) He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender。

(原文) We had a short rest。 Then we began to play happily。 We sang and danced。

(修正) After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing。

4。 注意连接词与句子的运用。

以2001年高考作文为例,在信的开头,可加上“You want to know something about what is going on in schools in China?”这句话起承上启下的作用,使文章过渡自然;再如,用“What was worse?”引出减负前,晚上还要做作业,就寝时间11:30等要点。又如,“Now I have more free time。。。” 可引出减负后的情况。另外,在信的结尾,可用“How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you。”来自然地结束这封信。

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5。 使用过渡词语。

写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。那么,如何使文章行文连贯呢?这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语,过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样,起着润滑的作用。常用的过渡词语主要有:

并列递进:and, also, as well as, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, etc。

转折:but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc。

因果:because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc。

对比:or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc。

总结:in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc。

总之,要使文章的层次高,可读性强,考生应增加些较高级的词汇与复杂的结构,并运用恰当的连接词和复合句,只有这样,才能在考试中取得理想的成绩。