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During May day,I went to Shanghai with my family.We all fell in love with it at the moment we saw it.

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Shanghai is really a beautiful city!There are many tall buildings and trees!There are also many flowers,it makes Shanghai look like a nice garden!If I have oppotunities to visit Shanghai again,I will be very happy! i go to beijing yestoday.i see great wall and so on .

i'm very happy because i see a old red man. he is 95 years old.i like him because he tel our many story.

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五一期间,我和我的家人去了上海。我们都爱上了它目前我们看到它。

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上海真是一个美丽的城市!有很多高楼和树木!上海也有很多鲜花,看起来像一个漂亮的花园!如果我有机会再次访问上海,我将会非常快乐!我昨天去北京了。我看到长城等等。

我很高兴,因为我看到一个红色的老人。他已经95岁了。我喜欢他因为他电话我们的许多故事。